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HORRIBLE
SANITY
Feature Script (74 pages)
By Robert C. Powers
Genre: Drama/Horror
LOGLINE:
He was quite insane and enjoyed it until a
mysterious girl lured a young man to hunt for treasure in the old swamp house
where he hid
and brought him to a world of unwelcome sanity.
SYNOPSIS:
In the rural south in the 1930s, CADE (17), abandoned by his mother, comes to
his grandfather’s farm where he’s not overly welcome. He meets an alluring girl,
JULIE MAY (17), who tells him of treasure hidden in an old house in a nearby
swamp. She tempts him to go there, though GRANDPA, (62), forbids it.
Cade’s Uncle Efram was like a father to Cade. But, Efram turned to crime, killed
a bank guard and was blasted by a police shotgun. He got away with the help of
his girlfriend, ALICIA, but was reported drowned in the swamp. Rumor says that
before he died, he hid a fortune in the swamp house. Cade is fascinated with
Julie May who uses her sexual wiles to persuade him to go to the swamp house.
There, they encounter Cade’s Uncle Efram. Cade is shocked, and in spite of
Efram’s terrible disfigurement, he finds he still loves his uncle. Efram
seems sane but tells Cade he is really insane, dangerous and terribly hurt when
periods of sanity return. Seeing Cade brings back his sanity…and his pain.
Julie May asks Efram where the money is. Her presence seems to inflame Efram’s
anger and his insanity returns. He chases them out of the house and disappears.
A sudden, violent storm strikes and Julie May disappears. Cade searches for her
and has a confrontation with Efram. He finds Julie May and they escape as the
old house is torn apart by the storm.
They think Efram died in the storm. Cade and Julie May find a treasure
box uncovered by the storm. Efram approaches them, alive and sane. He gives Cade
a revolver and asks him to put him out of his misery. Cade can’t do it. Efram
becomes a monster and charges Cade. Cade shoots Efram dead and discovers
that Julie May is really the ghost of ALICIA, Uncle Efram’s girlfriend
who Efram killed in an argument over the treasure.
Cade escapes Alicia, takes the treasure, buys a new car and drives away.
Suddenly, there’s a presence beside him.
It’s Alicia! She wants the treasure…and him. He wrecks the car. Alicia is
trapped in the flaming wreckage. He ignores her and saves the money, but…he’s
followed by the flaming image of Alicia!
The gripping story of Cade and Julie May leads to a shocking twist in the
finale. It has few locations and
characters and would be inexpensive to film.
THEME:
Be careful of hidden treasure...it might find you, or the dangers of finding a
treasure may be exceeded by the pleasures of having it.
COVERAGE:
A very strong piece of writing with exceptionally good use of screenplay
formatting. The story employs an
incredible, powerful and interesting concept, very well-executed and fast paced.
From the first pages, the story of Cade grabs the reader. (Screenplay Readers, a
professional coverage organization, rating; “CONSIDER”)
LOCATIONS:
1) Farm House 2) Swamp 3) Swamp House 4) Car
CHARACTERS:
Six
May I send the script?
Robert C Powers